Member Speech: Jerry the Genie 2

Advanced Manual: Humorously Speaking, "Leave Them With a Smile"
Author & Speaker: Dan Mukendi
Speech done at Randburg Toastmaster Club
Evaluation by: Hans Kast
Time 5-7 minutes
(c) Author, 2006

Speech structure:
Topic: How to makes wishes come true
Intro: Housewife's wish
Body: Twelve Inches (Clarity)
+ Many problems, most never happened (Positive)
+ Clear, Positive and Real
Closing: Highway to paradise

Objectives:

• Prepare a serious speech that opens and closes with a humorous stories
• Prepare a closing story that reemphasizes the speech's main point
  
• Deliver the stories smoothly and effectively
  

Evaluation Feedback:
The topic could have clearer as in the objective (serious speech)
The focus should be sandwishing a serious speech with humorous even light hearted stories
Audience was amused!
You're an accomplished speaker and the audience at Randburg Toastmasters felt honoured to have you.
Smooth delivery that need vocal variety in this case.. and more volume to fit the venue.

posted by Speech Quest @ 9:51 AM