February 21, 2006

Member Speech: Jerry the Genie 3

Advanced Manual: Humorously Speaking, "Make Them Laugh"
Author & Speaker: Dan Mukendi
Speech done at Standard Bank Toastmasters Club
Evaluation by: Lynne Randell
Time 5-7 minutes
(c) Author, 2006

Speech structure:
Topic: How to makes wishes come true
Intro: Housewife's wish
Body: Drunk Million Ducks (Clarity)
+ Friends and the island (Choose your friends)
+ Clear, Positive and Real
Closing: Highway to Hawaii

Objectives:
  • Prepare a serious speech that opens and closes with a humorous stories
  • Include jokes in the speech body to illustrate points or maintain audience interest
  • Deliver the stories smoothly and effectively

Evaluation Feedback:
Time taken: 7:07 minutes
The opening was effective
The stories linked well to the topic. In the joke, Johannesburg could have been changed to Durban ("Coast to coast" reference would have been more effective
The jokes nicely emphesised the topic.
There was a lot of poses, although not too much.

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